Contents Draft 2

Here is a second draft of a contents page.  I tried a slightly different layout to the one I used before, however not too different because I quite liked the one in the first draft.  I've also made some of the improvements that I identified from my first draft, by;

• adjusting my layout 
• adding a band index 
• adding a picture with the editor's note
• adding the editor's contact details
• including the magazine's website address
• giving credit to photographers
• shrinking the size of the 'CONTENTS'

My first draft was good but could have been better

Second draft, improvements on the first
have been made

However, I prefer the subtitles of the contents in the first draft because they stand out more...

Here I've done a diagram to illustrate the things I've drawn from other magazine contents pages.  I've circled the 'cover story' markers because I want to add those to my next draft