Here is the 2nd draft of my double page spread which I was quite happy with, although there were a few problems which needed fixing. 
The text was too blocky before, which might be off-putting because it would look like a lot of text to read in one go. So, to make it look more manageable, I put in a pull quote which makes it look like the text is more broken up. A pull quote also has the advantage of 'pulling' the reader in and making them want to read the whole article.
Furthermore, the picture in the top left of the right page looked a bit out of place, so I moved it downwards in line with the box in the bottom right corner, and replaced it with the social networking details of the band. This makes the magazine more appealing to modern audience because many bands have an internet fanbase which crosses over with the whole fanbase.
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